01 / Evidence and interpretation
Check the journey’s duration.
The two entries give different elapsed times. Whether that is a continuity problem depends on whether they describe the same journey in the same time frame.
Departure: 08:00.
Arrival: 10:00.
Elapsed travel time: six hours.
- Observation
- Entry A implies two hours if the times share a date and time zone; entry B explicitly states six.
- Possible impact
- A conflicting duration may change the sequence of nearby events. Its importance depends on the surrounding story.
- Confidence
- The arithmetic is straightforward. The relationship between the entries still requires context.
- Check first
- Journey identity, date, time zone, any intermediate stop, and whether a narrator or in-world record is meant to be unreliable.
02 / A revision decision
Give the author a useful next step.
Locate both passages and check the surrounding text. If they describe the same elapsed journey, reconcile the timing. If they describe different stages, clarify that distinction only if a reader needs it.
| Where | Action | Author decision |
|---|---|---|
| Chapters 4 + 9 | Compare journey records and nearby events. | Pending context review |
You might revise, retain the passages with a reason, or mark the issue for a human editor. The report should support that choice.
03 / Scope and limits
Say what was actually checked.
This illustration contains only two invented entries. It supports no claim about a manuscript, the system’s recall, or false-positive rates.
In a delivered audit, the coverage section distinguishes completed checks, unavailable checks, and candidates that were not individually adjudicated. An unreviewed candidate is not a confirmed defect.
04 / After you revise
Recheck the evidence.
The included second full read applies to the revised version of the same work. Supported findings can be compared against the earlier version when the baseline is available.
A finding can change, persist, or need another look. If an earlier finding is not surfaced again, that absence alone is not proof that it has been fixed.